Stories I am using: “The Ones Who Walk Away from Omelas” by Ursula K. Le Guin and “The Red Bow” by George Saunders
I have written the rough publish and I need editing to be done.
EDIT ONLY ” ENGL 1C ESSAY ONE publish”
Title: This title should, in a way, tell the reader exactly what your essay is about
Introduction paragraph : 1. Start with a general idea or two that eases the reader into the overall topic or subject matter at hand in the essay 2. Briefly introduce only the aspect(s) of “The Red Bow” that relates closely to my thesis
3. Briefly introduce only the aspect(s) of “The Ones Who Walk Away from Omelas” that relates closely to my thesis
4.End w/ Thesis
Body Paragraphs/ conclusion: 1. add citations to paraphrases, just quoting is not enough to convey you know what you are talking about.
2. Do not start a sentence with a quotation( set it up).
3. Make sure the in-text citation follows MLA format.
4. Provide strong surface/ subtext evidence and understanding.
5. The current publish is a bit too long, try to get it down in word count, without lowering the quality of the paper.
6. Follow the instructions that are added to this order! (A rubric for an A quality paper is also added).
7. Fix all grammar and errors is paper.
8. add more paraphrased evidence from the stories.
9. Lastly, make paper sound high quality.
Work cited:
I already attached the short stories and have started to include quotations. I just need a MLA format work cited page for the two stories.
I have attached an example of the essay format.
only edit ” ENGL 1 C ESSAY ONE publish”