Dear Writer,
The second section of Chapter 2 needs to be reviewed/edited now according to the comments in the simple markup.
1 – It seems that there are claims in the paper that need to be sourced and strongly supported, please add appropriate and relevant solid relevant and updated scholarly research to support those claims (read the comments on the right hand side panel for more detailed instructions)
2 – Please track changes on all changes
3- Please highlight the changes you make and also highlight the sources you added in the Reference Section
Please ask me any questions you may have. I would like an updated Final (on the Master Paper not separately) every 4-5 Days of what you have worked on please. I mean as you make the changes a few pages at a time, just send me the paper with the changes you made, tracked, and highlighted, but continue to work on the rest, then after another few pages, send me another update.
Thank you so much, blessings.